Average rating: | Rated 4 of 5. |
Level of importance: | Rated 3 of 5. |
Level of validity: | Rated 3 of 5. |
Level of completeness: | Rated 5 of 5. |
Level of comprehensibility: | Rated 4 of 5. |
Competing interests: | None |
Review provided by Dr Brian Mantlana
Page | Statement from the article | Comment |
Page 4 of 37 | The continued side-lining of voices from LDCs and those most vulnerable in society is detrimental not only to those communities and regions but also to the solidarity of global climate action | It would have been helpful to provide both an elaboration of who is sidelining the voices from LDCs and how is the sidelining of LDC voices manifests. |
Page 18 of 37 | But the Paris Agreement commitments have simply not been met. | Strictly speaking, the agreed timeframe for implementing the Paris Agreement is from 2021 up to 2025 and up to 2030 for others. This sentence could have been written in a manner that indicates that is less definitive. |
Page 18 of 37 | There is growing interest in pushing investment into developing African gas. | Sentence construction is too colloquial. It is likely that the authors are referring to gas reserves that are found in Africa. |